ext_100502 ([identity profile] clover71.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cloversworld 2009-01-27 04:39 am (UTC)

oh..it broke my heart to write about david's family. but i wanted to convey how difficult it is for them to fight for their existence, not just their survival.

i was hoping that the young man david met at the end of this part would remain inconspicuous. i guess i fail at keeping secrets. but i must've been thinking too much of cook when i was writing this that the description gave it away?

thanks so much for reading bb!

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